# tOriy — App Intro Video Scripts
*The trailers. These answer "what IS this app?" before any feature video ever runs. Three concepts per app — pick one per app, or film all three and rotate them as pinned posts. All are no-face: hand + phone screen + voiceover + burned-in text. Target: 30–45 seconds. End card on every one: toriy.me.*

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# PART 1 — tOriy.me (the social app)

## Concept 1: "Nobody Types Here" ⭐ recommended opener
*The pattern interrupt. The whole app in one weird rule.*

| Time | Screen / Hand | Voiceover | On-screen text |
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| 0–3s | Thumb hovering over a keyboard, then pushing the phone away | "This app has no keyboard. You can't type a single post." | NO TYPING ALLOWED 🎙️ |
| 3–8s | Hold record, say something, release — waveform appears | "You talk. That's your post. Your actual voice." | YOUR VOICE = YOUR POST |
| 8–15s | Scroll the city feed — waveforms, timers counting down | "And everything here lives for 24 hours. Then it's gone. Forever." | GONE IN 24H ⏳ |
| 15–22s | Map zoom-out: pins across Cameroon | "Douala has a feed. Buea has a feed. Eighteen cities, eighteen timelines." | 18 CITIES. YOURS INCLUDED. |
| 22–28s | Follow/friends screen | "Follow back and you're friends — and friends on this app get keys to things…" | FRIENDS GET KEYS 🔑 |
| 28–33s | Black → logo | "tOriy.me. Talk. Before it's gone." | toriy.me |

**Music:** sparse beat, cuts dead on "gone. Forever." — silence sells the ephemerality.

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## Concept 2: "Your City's Internet"
*The local-pride angle. Best for recruiting in one specific city — swap the named city per version.*

| Time | Screen / Hand | Voiceover | On-screen text |
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| 0–3s | City feed mid-scroll, voices playing | "This is Buea's timeline. Not Cameroon's. BUEA's." | YOUR TOWN. YOUR FEED. 🏙️ |
| 3–9s | Switch to another city, feed changes completely | "Douala's is completely different. Because Douala IS completely different." | EVERY CITY IS ITS OWN WORLD |
| 9–16s | Record a drop tagged to the city | "What you say lands in YOUR city. Your people hear it first." | LOCAL FIRST |
| 16–24s | Map, hunt alert pings | "And when a hunt drops in your town… the whole town moves." | THE CITY PLAYS TOGETHER 🧭 |
| 24–30s | Black → logo | "tOriy.me — your city's own internet." | toriy.me |

**Film note:** make one version per launch city (Buea, Douala, Bamenda). Same script, swap the name. Three ads for the price of one script.

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## Concept 3: "The App That Forgets"
*The mystery/FOMO angle. Slowest open, strongest payoff.*

| Time | Screen / Hand | Voiceover | On-screen text |
|---|---|---|---|
| 0–4s | A voice drop playing, timer at 00:41 | "In 41 seconds, this post stops existing." | ⏳ 00:41 |
| 4–10s | Feed refresh — the drop is gone | "Not archived. Not hidden. Gone." | NOT HIDDEN. GONE. |
| 10–18s | Recording a new drop | "So people here say what they actually mean. No screenshots. No history. No receipts." | NO RECEIPTS 🎙️ |
| 18–26s | Quick cuts: feed, map, friends, wallet top-up | "Voice posts. 18 cities. Hunts. Friends with benefits. Even your MoMo works here." | ONE APP. A WHOLE CITY LIFE. |
| 26–32s | Black → logo | "tOriy.me. If you know, you're early." | toriy.me |

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# PART 2 — tOriy Life (the life simulator)

## Concept 1: "A Whole Country in Your Pocket" ⭐ recommended opener
*The world tour. Shows scale first, depth second.*

| Time | Screen / Hand | Voiceover | On-screen text |
|---|---|---|---|
| 0–3s | Map of Cameroon, your pin in Buea | "This is a game where the map is the whole country." | THE WHOLE COUNTRY 🗺️ |
| 3–8s | Tap 🚏 at Mile 17, route board opens | "Real bus stations. Real distances. Real fares." | 18 CITIES BY BUS 🚌 |
| 8–15s | Commute Cinema: the tOriy Express rolling, billboard passes, ETA counting | "The trip itself is the show. Billboards pass. The clock runs." | THE RIDE IS A MOVIE 🎬 |
| 15–24s | Quick cuts: clock-in at work, rent warning, showroom car, exam hall | "You work shifts. Pay rent. Miss it — you're locked out. Buy a car. Sit exams. Fail them." | WORK. RENT. CARS. SCHOOL. |
| 24–31s | Visiting a friend's house in another city | "And when a friend invites you… you pack and go." | FRIENDS = KEYS 🏡 |
| 31–37s | Black → logo | "tOriy Life. Cameroon, but you live twice." | toriy.me |

**Music:** builds through the quick cuts, drops out for "you live twice."

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## Concept 2: "A Day in My tOriy Life"
*The POV vlog. Feels like content, not an ad. Highest rewATCH potential.*

| Time | Screen / Hand | Voiceover | On-screen text |
|---|---|---|---|
| 0–3s | Waking up in-game, needs bars low | "POV: a day in my tOriy Life. I woke up hungry. Again." | A DAY IN MY tOriy LIFE |
| 3–9s | Odd job → clock-in → payout 💰 | "Did a shift. Bike work. The pay landed — listen." *(cash sfx)* | SHIFT #1 💼 |
| 9–14s | Rent banner, paying it | "Paid rent before they locked my door. Learned that lesson last week." | RENT: PAID 😮‍💨 |
| 14–21s | Walk to 🚏, board the bus, Commute Cinema night scene | "Then my boy invited me to Douala, so… bus. Watch this ride." | BUEA → DOUALA 🚌 |
| 21–28s | Arrival card, friend's door, club room | "Arrived. His house, his rules. Then the club — had to buy a round to enter. Rules." | HIS HOUSE, HIS RULES 🏡 |
| 28–35s | Trail on map → share card | "This line? My whole day. The app tracked it." | MY DAY, AS A ROUTE 🛰️ |
| 35–40s | Black → logo | "tOriy Life. Come be somebody." | toriy.me |

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## Concept 3: "The Game That Doesn't Play"
*The realism-shock montage. Each beat is a rule that shouldn't exist in a game.*

| Time | Screen / Hand | Voiceover | On-screen text |
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| 0–3s | Locked door (rent) | "This game locked me out of my own house. Over rent." | RENT. IN A GAME. 🏠 |
| 3–7s | Collapse on the street | "I forgot to eat. My guy collapsed in the street." | EAT OR DROP 🍽️ |
| 7–11s | Exam hall, timer | "The exam is timed. Leave the screen — you fail." | DON'T LEAVE THE SCREEN 🎓 |
| 11–15s | Bouncer denying entry | "A bouncer told me to buy a drink first." | NO ROUND, NO ENTRY 🍺 |
| 15–19s | Kicked from a friend's house, waiting on mercy bus | "My friend put me out at night. I waited 3 hours for the free ride home." | PUT OUT AT 11PM 😬 |
| 19–24s | Bank interest line landing | "But my savings earn interest overnight. Make it make sense." | INTEREST. ALSO REAL. 🏦 |
| 24–30s | Quick wins montage: payout, car keys, certificate | "It's not a game that plays with you. It's a life that does." | A WHOLE SECOND LIFE |
| 30–35s | Black → logo | "tOriy Life. Handle your business." | toriy.me |

**Music:** deadpan silence under each rule, one beat hit per cut. The driest video of the six — and likely the most shared.

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## Production notes (all six)
- **Cold open before logo, always.** The toriy.me end card is the only branding until the last 3 seconds — the editor skill adds it automatically.
- **On-screen text carries the video** — most views are muted. Every VO line has a text twin.
- **Film the B-roll of every screen you touch** (5 extra seconds each) — the feature videos reuse this footage.
- **Recommended pair:** tOriy.me Concept 1 + tOriy Life Concept 1 as the pinned trailers; run the others as follow-ups two weeks apart.